Ahh!!! That very single moment, I was not my own self
I didn’t believe that I was a living thing
No flashing thoughts
No fears
No sense of time
Thinking about nothing certainly…
Triumph-disaster
Good-bad
You-me
Dawn-dusk
Not a hint of these came to my attention
But …but just for one petite second!!!!!
The next second everything was predictable….hmmmm
I doubt…is this what u call eternity??
[Went through this episode at some stage in my rain watching activity today]
Eternity???Better call it dozing! =))
oh dozzing is sumthing where u still think of sum or da other crap….
This piece encapsulates that one second you felt…which I think is quite amazingly done. Liked every bit of it.
Keep writing
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[Thanx a lot for including me in your blogroll
thnx a ton grl
hmm … why don’t these poems hit my brain
anyways i always admire people how write these…
because i find it too difficult to even comprehend.
by the way you should have left ur link there in my site..luckily i got across this site through referrers in my blog stats column .
i dnt call it exact poetry tooo
its sumthng abstract n free-verse!!!
nice, do u listen to metal?
its nice, spontaneous…and that’s the beauty of expression. all poetry has to be like that. keep it going please.
thnx!!! spontaenity is the best part of poetry!![i think]
